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Reviews For How We Fall
Title: In Shadow 05 Mar 2012 11:49 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter! Wow, Sev's really of the cold sort whe it comes to Harry, isn't he? Well, anyway, he healed him, that counts for something. Also it makes interaction between those two even more exciting because one never knows what will come of it. I really liked the friendship between Harry and Draco. They are brilliant especially bantering and all. Great work, your Melfis.
Title: Souvenirs 05 Mar 2012 4:15 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I can understand Snape rationalizing Harry's abuse, even in the face of his injuries, but I can't imagine why he seems equally dismissive of Draco's injuries. Shouldn't he be frothing at the bit to get back at Sirius for the damage done to his godson? Even if he does blame Harry, he knows Sirius is the one who caused the physical damage.

    Author's Response:

    He is very angry, but at this point he's still taking things out on Harry in the form of denying him the attention he needs.  I also don't believe in revenge, I dont' like reading stories or writing stories with revenge, so there will be none of that.  It hasn't been written in yet, but Severus knows that Dumbledore will want this swept under the table.  They still need Sirius for Order things.  Severus knows this from personal experience already because he has openly shown his dislike for Sirius in the past and Dumbledore has told him to keep a lid on it so to speak.

     

    Hope this helps!  Thanks for reviewing.  I will try to get more of Severu's thoughts about Sirius into the story.  There will be ample opportunity for it! 

Title: Souvenirs 05 Mar 2012 6:53 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus realizing that it wasn't Harry's fault when Sirius does come looking for him and/or Draco finally opens up about what happened. Maybe Severus witnessing the abuse or accidently legilizing Harry when he's shaking.
Title: Souvenirs 05 Mar 2012 4:32 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think, I want more. Please? I'm glad Snape is at least attempting to think on it. And Draco is being friend with Harry. (I like Harry and Draco as friends.) Is something going to set Draco off on Snape for not helping enough or something? Or is Harry going to do something that Snape assumes is because of something? Anyway more please???
Title: Souvenirs 05 Mar 2012 2:29 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh Snape's so mean!
    Harry really did try to help! I hope that they can somehow begin to understand one another...And I sincerely hope that Sirius doesn't come back :(
    Great job though!
    It's a really touching story.
Title: Souvenirs 05 Mar 2012 1:47 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story - but I do think that Severus needs to get his head out his arse! :) He really needs to talk to Draco about what happened - maybe even use Legilmens on him too, to corraborate (sp) the story of Harry's.

    And then, they need to address Harry's fears and rejection(s) from Dumbledore not letting him stay at the castle over the summers. Poor Harry!

    Really hope things look up for him once the situation gets addressed and soon!

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    PS I would love to see Harry do the Owl potions business. I am sure he would be better than average. But where would he do the potions? The Room of Requirement?
Title: Souvenirs 05 Mar 2012 1:06 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Sev should get Draco's story and Draco should tell him everything, hold nothing back. Sev will have to eat a little crow and start helping Harry as well.
Title: Souvenirs 04 Mar 2012 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Definitely got my attention...I definitely hope that Snape will see the error of his ways before Harry really goes around the bend.

    One scene I'd really like to see is Harry defending Draco at the cost of his own life, something physical or stepping in front of a hex or something. Hopefully that'll get Snape's attention.
Title: In Shadow 04 Mar 2012 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a lovely chapter...albeit very sad.
Title: What They Sent You 04 Mar 2012 11:22 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww...Poor Harry, he never gets a break!

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