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Reviews For How We Fall
Author's Response: He is very angry, but at this point he's still taking things out on Harry in the form of denying him the attention he needs. I also don't believe in revenge, I dont' like reading stories or writing stories with revenge, so there will be none of that. It hasn't been written in yet, but Severus knows that Dumbledore will want this swept under the table. They still need Sirius for Order things. Severus knows this from personal experience already because he has openly shown his dislike for Sirius in the past and Dumbledore has told him to keep a lid on it so to speak.
Hope this helps! Thanks for reviewing. I will try to get more of Severu's thoughts about Sirius into the story. There will be ample opportunity for it!
Harry really did try to help! I hope that they can somehow begin to understand one another...And I sincerely hope that Sirius doesn't come back :( Great job though! It's a really touching story.
And then, they need to address Harry's fears and rejection(s) from Dumbledore not letting him stay at the castle over the summers. Poor Harry! Really hope things look up for him once the situation gets addressed and soon! Hugs and Love, Vanime PS I would love to see Harry do the Owl potions business. I am sure he would be better than average. But where would he do the potions? The Room of Requirement?
One scene I'd really like to see is Harry defending Draco at the cost of his own life, something physical or stepping in front of a hex or something. Hopefully that'll get Snape's attention.
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