Oh wow..seems like a great start!
I hope Snape gets his head out of his arse and becomes Severus soon. I hate seeing Harry like this. Doesn't he suffer enough? Kudos, and please write more.
Yikes! I always thought that Sirius was unstable after Azkaban.
And of course, Albus wouldn't see it, cause he's still thinking of Sirius as his student.
Maybe a visit from Remus, who's discovered a ranting and raving Sirius? Who is genuinely concerend about Harry? Because he's just figured out how crazy Sirius is?
Of course, Harry would assume Remus was trying to take him back to Sirius. So perhaps Harry looks for somewhere safe to hide out in the castle. Like the Chamber of Secrets, maybe?
This sure is exciting. Well, the predictable storyline would be that one day, Sirius comes and find Harry, trash him, then Snape intervenes and saves him from Sirius' wrath. The unpredictable part...well, its unpredictable for a reason. I love the story though, keep going!
Meep!!!! *wants next chapter* *bounces up and down* *pulls on your sleeve repeatedly*
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| 04 Mar 2012 2:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the banner nd the story! I think we need a crises perhaps Drco ying omething to Harry about the summer that gives Harry a panic attack. Another idea is that Sirius get Dumbledore to say that Harry must return and that gives the panic attack. Just couple of ideas I'm ure you have better!
My tears are running and my heart is breaking for Harry
I think Severus might need to come across Harry sicking up to understand the extent of his anxiety and get an idea of Harry's feeling of self-loathing. Maybe Harry's depression and anxiety gets to the point that Harry collapses during a meal? Can't wait for more
Love it. I'd like to help if I can JAWorley. Let me kknow. Can't wait for more
Poor Harry will Sev see the truth?
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