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Reviews For Fox Tale
Title: Into the Woods 10 Mar 2012 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the chapter and the story. Brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, and thank you for reviewing!
Title: Into the Woods 10 Mar 2012 8:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm hoping he will rescue Harry! I'm surprised there are no alarms to let Dumbledore know thaat Harry has gone! Thank you an unusual story

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Dumbledore has been somewhat careless and has been relying too much on Mrs. Figg, as the second part of the story will show. I'm glad you liked it, thank you for reviewing!
Title: Into the Woods 10 Mar 2012 8:37 pm
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! This is wonderful! What an evil pastime ... hunting after muggle children. I liked how you did the perspective of each of the people. It switched very smoothly and I had no trouble tossing my mind into another character's head. I also found it interesting that you had McNair in there, and it does make quite a lot of sense that he would do that. The story was very well written, and I most enjoyed the trip into Snape's head, and the little things here and there that were said about him, such as Lucius' comment on his shabby robes and working-class manners.
    One thing I would like to point out is that one of the lines when Severus is talking to Dumbledore says "... that wouldn't have noble, would it?" is missing a word in there. One of those silly things that happens when the brain is too fast for the hands! ;) Anyways, I thought you ought to know, as I like it when people point out those things in my own writing.
    The story is really enjoyable so far, and I cannot wait for the next chapter! Oh yes, and the ending to this chapter was wonderfully evil. Oh cliff hangers ... I appreciate a good cliff hanger, as you probably know!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you liked it, Whitetail! The different POVs were something of an experiment, and I'm glad you think it worked; writing a character like Macnair can be very interesting, because canon doesn't offer a lot of information and there's so much room for interpretation. Thank you for pointing out the missing word, I fixed that! Yes, I can never resists a cliffie ;)... but the second part of the story is finished and just needs to be edited, so it should be up soon. Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review!


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