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Reviews For Fox Tale
Author's Response: Thank you very much, and thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Dumbledore has been somewhat careless and has been relying too much on Mrs. Figg, as the second part of the story will show. I'm glad you liked it, thank you for reviewing!
One thing I would like to point out is that one of the lines when Severus is talking to Dumbledore says "... that wouldn't have noble, would it?" is missing a word in there. One of those silly things that happens when the brain is too fast for the hands! ;) Anyways, I thought you ought to know, as I like it when people point out those things in my own writing. The story is really enjoyable so far, and I cannot wait for the next chapter! Oh yes, and the ending to this chapter was wonderfully evil. Oh cliff hangers ... I appreciate a good cliff hanger, as you probably know! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Whitetail! The different POVs were something of an experiment, and I'm glad you think it worked; writing a character like Macnair can be very interesting, because canon doesn't offer a lot of information and there's so much room for interpretation. Thank you for pointing out the missing word, I fixed that! Yes, I can never resists a cliffie ;)... but the second part of the story is finished and just needs to be edited, so it should be up soon. Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review! |
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