This is terrific. I love the whole set up of your story.
Oh, poor Harry. Tut, tut, Severus... he's barely even putting an effort forth if you believe Harry's pov.
This is a great Sev is Harry's stepfather fic, so much better than the usual 'he loves Harry because he's Lily's' tripe. This is at least interesting... yay for conflict.
You can probably tell I'm not a fan of lovey,dovey mush.
Great Job!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 10 Apr 2012 9:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love Malfoy really good impersination pf him. I think your everus ans Harry right too thank you
Nice picture of their relationship
Haha, I like the last line:)
I hope Harry being in Slytherin doesn't affect his relationship with Ron and Neville though.
Oh, this should be interesting. It seems as though Harry and Snape are going to have no choice but to get along.
Good job. Can't wait to see more.
Aw. I hope Snape isn't mean to him forever:( I can tell either way this story has sucked me in already lol good job!
I just love the last sentence about spotless classroom XD
So far so good, keep it up and you will have reader in me.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 08 Apr 2012 6:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Really enjoy this so far! Can't wait for your next update!
Oooooh dear, Severus is so evil in this story! And poor poor Harry with his mum never taking his side! Can't wait to see where this goes!
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