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Reviews For The High Road
Great job! misundersnape...
I liked that Severus is looking out for Hermione. It was really sweet:) Great job on this chapter:)
I was a bit confused when chapter 1 ended with Snape taking toddler Harry to the castle, and then chapter 2 it was many years later. However, I understood quickly and you told the story very well so far. I am looking forward to seeing where this story is going. I also despise Quirrel! Ugh, evil git. I like that Snape is making more effort, though I see his reasoning otherwise and you've kept them very realistic to the situation. I also really enjoy the interactions between Harry and Draco (the throwing under a bus comment was so IC and hilarious!), plus not making Ron a total "well you're in Slytherin so I hate you now" git. The Hermione scene with Snape was nice too, and her being friends with Harry in general. I wonder, who is the 5th room-mate of Harry's or is there none? I only counted 4. I also like that Alice and Frank survived, if I got that right? I'd be cool to see their interactions with Harry too. How did Sirius get out of Azkaban, was it Lily's doing in hid defence? Also, poor Harry with what Sev told him when he was 4. :( Keep it up, and I look forward to reading more! Author's Response: My reasoning with Sirius was that when Lily woke up she almost certainly would have revealed that it was Pettigrew and NOT Sirius who was the secret keeper which would have effectively exonerated him. I plan to bring Sirius into the mix later. Maybe over Christmas break or maybe sooner. My theory behind keeping Alice and Frank alive was that there would be a sort of ripple effect from Lily surviving and Severus having such an investment in the good side. This ripple effect will also affect the outcome for Draco and a couple of other characters. The problem I'm having is that the scope of the story is SO big. I keep wanting to do back story but I have so much going on in the present that it's difficult. Maybe I should have written it straight through and not jumped time? But preteen Harry was in my head, lol. I'm THINKING that while Harry is recovering from his ordeal would be a really good time to do my flashbacks since there is going to be A LOT of Lily-Severus interaction with maybe some Sirius thrown in. Haven't decided about that. It's going to be a major blame game. And I'm glad that you enjoyed reading Harry and Draco. I have enjoyed writing the two of them. They're total frienemies, though I don't think they have that word in the wizarding world, hehe. I have a lot planned for Draco. Thank you so much for your detailed review. :)
First excuse my English is very bad. I speak Spanish. I am learning English, reading fics, it helps me a lot. I love your Fic. But, I am very upset with Snape. Poor Harry, he must have suffered much. The part where Snape told him cry at 4 years. Left me very badly. Lily also gives me anger. But should defend her son. Your story is also real. There are many parents who "forget" to children when they remarry,
Nice chapter! I'm surprised by Snape's actions and behaviour (I've got the same hopes as Harry now - that everything will turn out fine at the end) but nevertheless I am happy about them. I can't wait for the update to see what exactly happens to little Harry and his dad :D
I hope that it wasn't Draco that told his father that Harry was going to meet his mother. I don't know if I trust either one of them. Great chapter, evil cliffie though!
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