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Reviews For The High Road
Title: Chapter 7 03 Feb 2022 1:20 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter. That got grisly fast, but was still gripping.
Title: Chapter 7 15 Apr 2012 9:38 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I was starting to wonder if Narcissa was involved in the murder... was she?
    Harry is affected, but he can't put his finger precisely on what's bothering him. Either that or he's got some convoluted theory dancing privately in his own head.
    misundersnape...
Title: Chapter 7 13 Apr 2012 9:38 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Cissa got a lover?
Title: Chapter 7 12 Apr 2012 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This is definitely an interesting chapter. I'm quite enjoying this story, I can't wait for more. Please update again soon!
Title: Chapter 7 12 Apr 2012 5:56 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! So Lucius was killed? Interesting. I'm curious about this mystery, I wonder who is responsible...
Title: Chapter 7 12 Apr 2012 3:14 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! I'm not happy with Lucius, but I feel bad for Draco.

    I'm glad that Snape is willing to try to be a better step-father to Harry and that he realises his mistakes.

    I'm worried now that someone killed Lucius because of what he did to Harry and I'm worried that it's someone who is close to Harry and that if they get arrested or worse, Harry will be devastated.

    Ooh, I hope that it's not Harry himself. Although, I guess that since he was unconcious and in pain from the Cruatius, it can't be. Okay, I'll stop theorizing now and just let "you" do the writing! :)

    Great chapter, but no surprise there! Can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Pandora. Do you know what's ironic? I assume your penname is after Pandora of Pandora's Box fame? Anesidora is actually another name she was referred to. Isn't that funny? Yes, poor Draco. I'm still deciding the direction I want to take him and Narcissa right now. He appears to be developing something akin to a friendship with Harry. I don't know if I want to nurture or destroy that. You'll just have to wait and see how the Lucius plot line plays out. ;)
Title: Chapter 7 12 Apr 2012 1:33 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter... I like that Sirius is at least a bit mature in this fic.... His convo with Harry wasn't Snape bashing and that's unusual... Good job there! Also, I like that Narcissa is a person... Not all regal. You're doing a fabulous job with this fic, especially with how fast you are updating:)

    Author's Response: Thank you :) I was unsure about Sirius. That is not how I initially planned to write him but then he kind of evolved. My reasoning was that in canon he's been locked up since he was very young and was very much stuck in the past. In this fic he has had time to grow up and mature in the real world . . . I honestly think he loves Harry and doesn't want him to be miserable, even if that means he has to be mature regarding Snape. I still wanted to show some tell-tale signs of immaturity, however, such as the inability to keep a girlfriend and an unwillingness to hold a job. I really wanted Narcissa and Lily to connect on a mom level, you know? If only for a moment. I'm a fan of the Black sisters, though, so I was willing to be generous with her. Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 12 Apr 2012 12:44 am
Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been hoping and I got it - a nice chapter...again!

    I'm glad that Sev realizes what effect his actions have on Harry, now he's able to work on their relationship - if Harry starts to accept Sev's efforts.

    Great work :D

    Author's Response: I have a plan for Severus and Harry in the next chapter. Although the mindmender is supposed to be primarily focused on helping Harry deal with his recent trauma, I have a feeling Snape might get dragged into it against his will. Very excited to write the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 7 12 Apr 2012 12:08 am
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Woo you're on a role with this story, I love long chapters! :) Ohh poor Harry, it must be even worse to not remember what happened to him, definitely makes it seem even more mysterious! And I love that you've made it possible for Remus and Tonks to be together! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens between Severus and Lily and also between Severus and Harry as he starts to recover! Looking forward to more, hope you update soon! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review hazpotsfan! I will be updating probably the day after tomorrow since I know mostly what I want to happen in the next chapter. I am a huge Remus/Tonks shipper so I had to throw them in there. I think they're a cute couple.

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