A real family moment. Just gotta get SEverus to stop avoiding and take the plunge. Harry is slightly more willing when he'd in the mood, which is a very good sigh that any effort from Severus at the right time will be very well received.
Nice!
misundersnape...
Might take a bit to fix this... though I use the term fix loosely... I rather think they hardly got the thing off the ground to begin with...
Excellent.
misundersnape
I was starting to wonder if Narcissa was involved in the murder... was she?
Harry is affected, but he can't put his finger precisely on what's bothering him. Either that or he's got some convoluted theory dancing privately in his own head.
misundersnape...
Sorry for my English.
I loved this chapter.
Anyway, I think.
Lily got married way too fast.
I think it was pretty selfish.
First his work.
Then her husband.
and neglect of his son.
Thanks for The upgrade fast.
I look forward to the next chapter.
really wonderful fic.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Sev, SEv... don't you know that by merely being 'at' the school that you were tasked with looking out for the boy like a parent. Now Lily is furious that you didn't take it seriously and try harder to get along with him!
Good job!
misundersnape...
Oi... disaster has struck. Heh, I knew Lucius wouldn't be able to supress that 'Mudblood' hatred for long. Severus is foolish for ever believing his little castigation would lead to changes in the elder Malfoy.
Great job!
misundersnape...
Harry! He's thowing the effort right back in Severus' face. I'm beginning to see just how this enmity has gone on for so long.
No, you silly boy - Severus might not be your friend or 'father-figure' but he's always been your provider and protector... and it seems that job of SEverus' is coming up next if that note is to be believed.
FANTASTIC!
Aww, this is a bit heartbreaking. I feel bad for all of them. Snape does try, he just has no clue how to break free of the cocoon preventing him from bonding with Harry.
Time for that discussion... but I'm not sure a first attempt will go well at all.
Great job - I love it!
Oh, poor Harry. Tut, tut, Severus... he's barely even putting an effort forth if you believe Harry's pov.
This is a great Sev is Harry's stepfather fic, so much better than the usual 'he loves Harry because he's Lily's' tripe. This is at least interesting... yay for conflict.
You can probably tell I'm not a fan of lovey,dovey mush.
Great Job!
Oh, Severus' distaste of the boy is obvious - lucky he was friends with that healer, otherwise I don't think anyone would have allowed that. Heh, he'd just been interrogated for being a Death Eater, afterall.
I assume Harry will grow on him... let's see...
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