I love the realism of this story, especially in your characterization of Harry. I'm really enjoying this :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's what I was going for.
I loved it.
This very short!
Grant us another chapter soon please!
Really fantastic
I love Spaguettis
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am working on it as we speak. It might be up as soon as tonight.
Uh oh...I don't think the visit will go to well. Hope things get solved soon!
Author's Response: Definitely not. The Malfoys are not bringing any good news on the Draco or Cissy front.
Great chapter! I love that Sev and Harry are making some leeway here. They so deserve it. And I like how Harry had the little unfocused memory thing happen. You are doing an excellent job with this story. Can't wait for more:)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I figured it was about time for them to take a step in the right direction. The only problem is Harry is desperate to keep that peace and . . . well, one thing very canon about my Harry is his ability to make bad decisions and inevitably put himself in danger.
Wooo another update :) Aww that chapter was very fluffy and cute, at least they're starting to get along better! Although I do wonder how well that will hold if Harry does something that Severus doesn't approve of! Oooh that ending must mean that Harry is subconsciously aware of who his attacker was! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I thought we were in need of a little fluff. There's some more conflict coming, though. And yes, harry is subconsciously aware of who attacked him.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 14 Apr 2012 7:54 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Fabulous chapter, not bad at all! Keep up the great work!
Oh dear. I think that Snape and Harry really are more alike than they'd like to admit. Hopefully, the therapist will be able to get them to open up and the family can finally be a family in every sense of the word.
I am looking forward to the next chapter! Great job with the story. One of my favourites for sure! :)
Yes they are, unfortunately but I feel like these session were definitely a good idea. Can't wait for more!
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