Good bunny. Hands carrots.
I enjoyed this. It's disturbing not just because someone poisoned Snape (at Order HQ? or some other plot?) which shows the danger and difficulty he faces in his position, but also because of the far too realistic reactions of the adults (though perhaps excepting Dumbledore, I normally see him as thinking of Severus as a favourite (but flawed) son).
I also liked the children's reactions - especially Ron's. Too often he is depicted as malicious and stupid where the reverse is actually true. Of course someone almost dying would disturb him, especially someone he knows. Ron is not callous and he really would be the first to jump in and help someone in need.
So... is there more???!!! Snape doesn't die - surely?? How will the Order react to their own callousness? How will Snape react to having shown weakness in front of students and people he loathes?
More, more, more!!!
| Title: Chapter 1 - Bezoar
| 21 Apr 2012 4:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Poor Severus - clearly, the Order don't see him as one of their own, even if he works for them. I liked this very much; Harry gets an insight into a less pleasant side to his Godfather, his mentor and other trusted adults, and maybe sympathizes with Snape for the first time (since he knows how it feels to be the odd one out). Very well done - I wish there had been a scene like this in canon.
That was wonderful, but did Snape make it? I'm dying to know!!
Great job.
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