I want another chapter its a ciffhanger man. It is very well written and it also kinda proves that not everyone cared what happened to Severus when they should have cared more like Harry does. Please write another chapter or at least that we know if he was ok and if he knows that Harry and the rest help save his life.
So is Severus saved in your mind or doomed? Please let the people know!
I'd love to see this continue!
i really liked how you protrayed sev and the kids i would love to see maye a sqeuil to this to see how sev or if he recovers please thank you.
What! You can't end it there! :)
This was brilliant. I really liked how you wrote Snape. He was so vulnerable and desperate. I liked Ron too. Too often he is depicted as an insensitive jerk, when he really isn't.
100/10
I hope you will let us know what happens next
Good bunny. Hands carrots.
I enjoyed this. It's disturbing not just because someone poisoned Snape (at Order HQ? or some other plot?) which shows the danger and difficulty he faces in his position, but also because of the far too realistic reactions of the adults (though perhaps excepting Dumbledore, I normally see him as thinking of Severus as a favourite (but flawed) son).
I also liked the children's reactions - especially Ron's. Too often he is depicted as malicious and stupid where the reverse is actually true. Of course someone almost dying would disturb him, especially someone he knows. Ron is not callous and he really would be the first to jump in and help someone in need.
So... is there more???!!! Snape doesn't die - surely?? How will the Order react to their own callousness? How will Snape react to having shown weakness in front of students and people he loathes?
More, more, more!!!
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