please continue I love it alot
I read that note at the end in Liam Neeson's voice :-)
Are the Dursleys actually mentioned in this one?
| Title: Talking it Over
| 09 Nov 2013 3:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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Oh my goodness I really love this story! At first I saw this was tagged under romance/slash so I had my fair share of misgivings, but then I decided to give it a try. I love how you portray Severus (well, except when he acts all lovey-dovey) and the degree of corporal punishment is really awesome. Just right! More, if you could do it, you know! I really want to see this lovely story continued, and I can promise you that I am going to read the rest of this story in a heartbeat if you continue it! Please do not abandon this great piece of literature!
What happened? Chapter 26 is a repeat of chapter 25.
| Title: The troubles of parenting
| 01 Apr 2013 7:02 pm
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| Reviewer: x (Anonymous)
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why can't Snape cast a Reparo??? I'snt he supposed to be a wizard??!??
| Title: Gelato!
| 19 Jan 2013 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Anonymous)
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Why is chapter 26 a copy of chapter 25?
| Title: Gelato!
| 19 Jan 2013 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: kari (Anonymous)
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this is the same chapter but I read in ff net. And i think that you transplanted with punishment.
Together it was 100 smacks with hand and with hairbrush. I be not able to me even represent such pain. Such punishment this already abuse.
To this time spanking was admissible but now...
Please think over this chapter yet.
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