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Reviews For The Day he was Pushed too Far
I'm a bad person, I suppose, for feeling glad that Umbridge is gone... Not that vigilante justice is acceptable, but she ultimately did get what she deserved for what she did to Harry and what we can presume she did to other people in her quest for power. I liked Severus here. Normally I don't care for the "Ohmigosh! I've been treating Potter like cr*ap for 4 years, and I finally remembered he's Lily's boy!" epiphanies, but the situation here is one that can't help but have people make drastic changes in the way they think. The only thing that marred this chapter was Snape using "wanna" in his dialogue. I've just always seen him as such a precise person that I can't imagine him not being precise in his speech and enunciation. But thanks to the energy and tension in the rest of the chapter, it wasn't as annoying as I normally would have found it. On to the next chapter to see what happens next!
severus raw emotion was wow!!!
Author's Response: your right, its could have i was tired when i wrote that. thanks for pointin it out
Author's Response: before I fully thought out teh story, I knew Harry was gonna shoot himself lol..
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, i cant tell you what will happen to him tho lol
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