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Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 13 Dec 2018 8:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you the most angst riven chapter I have read
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 29 Jun 2014 2:50 am
Reviewer: Trish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Made me cry ;)
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 12 Jun 2012 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I'm racing through this but had to stop and review! Wonderful writing and a great story with wonderful pce thank you
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 22 May 2012 1:59 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    A very nerve-wracking chapter (and I mean that in a good way! *grin*); I was riveted to the screen, needing to see what would happen next.

    I'm a bad person, I suppose, for feeling glad that Umbridge is gone... Not that vigilante justice is acceptable, but she ultimately did get what she deserved for what she did to Harry and what we can presume she did to other people in her quest for power.

    I liked Severus here. Normally I don't care for the "Ohmigosh! I've been treating Potter like cr*ap for 4 years, and I finally remembered he's Lily's boy!" epiphanies, but the situation here is one that can't help but have people make drastic changes in the way they think.

    The only thing that marred this chapter was Snape using "wanna" in his dialogue. I've just always seen him as such a precise person that I can't imagine him not being precise in his speech and enunciation. But thanks to the energy and tension in the rest of the chapter, it wasn't as annoying as I normally would have found it.

    On to the next chapter to see what happens next!
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 21 May 2012 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow wow wow the wizarding world is learning that they hindered their boy who lived and hurt him more then anything
    severus raw emotion was wow!!!
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 21 May 2012 3:49 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    How pathetic is a 20-odd boy for coming to see a doctor accompanied by his mother? He looks very non-sympa too
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 21 May 2012 1:55 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed) [Report This]
    woah you have me crying on this chapter, I do have a question. You wrote " He couldn’t have ended up just like Umbridge shot and bleeding on the floor" Was it suppose to be 'He could have'or 'He wouldn't have'?

    Author's Response: your right, its could have i was tired when i wrote that. thanks for pointin  it out
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 20 May 2012 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I sort of expected that Harry will turn the gun on himself instead of having to shoot Snape...

    Author's Response:

    before I fully thought out teh story, I knew Harry was gonna shoot himself lol..

Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 20 May 2012 11:10 am
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    cant wait till the next chapter will it be out soon what will happen to harry

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading, i cant tell you what will happen to him tho lol
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 20 May 2012 9:34 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wooooow. Oh boy. Poor Hary! I hope that he will be able to live, to be okay. But after all of this, how will he live and heal and be strong again? He needs a lot of help. I am so glad that Dumbledore got through. How will they save Harry. Can they? Great story. Maybe Harry's a little more messed up than he is usually in a in-character canon version, but I could see him acting this way if enough bad things had happened. I wonder if other things happened to him that aren't explained yet in the story. Poor kid. Thanks for the update!

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