I like your story so far, but it seems too big a coincidence that his never-heard-of nephew would appear just as "Harry" dies. That's pretty see-through considering all the options that wizards have with disguising people etc. I just can't imagine people not noticing...
Author's Response: severus is well aware of the complications and he is very thorough. as for his never heard of nephew he has been heard of, he was just important.
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