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Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 13 Dec 2018 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter but where is Minerva in all this?
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 01 Jul 2014 12:21 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that you give other people a hard time too. In some stories only Harry has a problem and some of it rubs off on friends but other people have no problems at all they are just perfect little students. Here you even it out by not making Harry the only one with a hard time which makes it more believable.
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 29 May 2012 7:47 am
Reviewer: Catti666 (Signed) [Report This]
    ; ))))). As it was supposed to go. Sometimes people are supposed to be given time instead of a truth just then. Sure I knew it was not over with Harry. Though there's gonna with some problem with getting a healer though. If they realize who he is...
    But I did love that chappy!

    Author's Response: I know..Harry is far from being ok..maybe not a healer then...but a muggle physchiatrist
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 29 May 2012 3:00 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yep, that helps!
    great job.

    V.

    Author's Response: tHANKS
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 29 May 2012 1:27 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow!

    Author's Response: That better be a good wow :)
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 29 May 2012 12:46 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks like Harry's actions have caused a significant toll on everyone...I almost feel bad for Draco and Ron and all them...if they didn't deserve it.
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 10:50 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    SO SAD BUT GOOD MORE PLEASE WHEN YOU CAN

    Author's Response: I WILL DONT WORRY :)
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well writen--thanks for sharing.

    One note--it would make it easier to read if there were some sort of breaks between POV's took me a moment to catch up to each jump.

    Have a good holiday!
    V.

    Author's Response:

    glad you liked it and Thanks.

    I put little markers that tells you for different point of views..i hope that helps

    you as well, hope its great.

Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 3:35 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much
Title: Chapter 17: Emotional Turmoil 28 May 2012 2:36 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    There, I've caught up with you.
    Pretty intense, for sure. I'm interested to see where you're going with this.

    Author's Response:

    Yea this chapter was loaded...but its just the tip of the ice berg...Draco 's breakdown because he is the only student who knows Harry is 'dead' having witnessed...its going to be interesting to see how he copes along with everyone else.. I wasnt sure I put it where you could litterally feel their emotions but I take it you can. I'm glad you like it, and caught up. I'm still trying to catch up to my reviews lol.

     Thanks



    Author's Response:

    Yea this chapter was loaded...but its just the tip of the ice berg...Draco 's breakdown because he is the only student who knows Harry is 'dead' having witnessed...its going to be interesting to see how he copes along with everyone else.. I wasnt sure I put it where you could litterally feel their emotions but I take it you can. I'm glad you like it, and caught up. I'm still trying to catch up to my reviews lol.

     Thanks


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