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Reviews For The Day he was Pushed too Far
But I did love that chappy! Author's Response: I know..Harry is far from being ok..maybe not a healer then...but a muggle physchiatrist
great job. V. Author's Response: tHANKS
Author's Response: That better be a good wow :)
Author's Response: I WILL DONT WORRY :)
One note--it would make it easier to read if there were some sort of breaks between POV's took me a moment to catch up to each jump. Have a good holiday! V. Author's Response: glad you liked it and Thanks. I put little markers that tells you for different point of views..i hope that helps you as well, hope its great.
Author's Response: Thanks so much
Pretty intense, for sure. I'm interested to see where you're going with this. Author's Response: Yea this chapter was loaded...but its just the tip of the ice berg...Draco 's breakdown because he is the only student who knows Harry is 'dead' having witnessed...its going to be interesting to see how he copes along with everyone else.. I wasnt sure I put it where you could litterally feel their emotions but I take it you can. I'm glad you like it, and caught up. I'm still trying to catch up to my reviews lol. Thanks Author's Response: Yea this chapter was loaded...but its just the tip of the ice berg...Draco 's breakdown because he is the only student who knows Harry is 'dead' having witnessed...its going to be interesting to see how he copes along with everyone else.. I wasnt sure I put it where you could litterally feel their emotions but I take it you can. I'm glad you like it, and caught up. I'm still trying to catch up to my reviews lol. Thanks |
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