Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 15 Dec 2018 3:35 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I love the various interactions
Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 15 Jan 2014 2:54 am
Reviewer: tresta (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting premise; I really like the ideas you are working with. I do feel that working with a beta reader would brush up the language and vocabulary and help make this good story even better. Ideas are the essence of anything creative, but the way the art (story, sculpture, whatever) is presented counts a great deal.

    I am very willing to work with you and beta the chapters that you have done so far. If you are interested in this let me know and we'll figure out how to work it.

    Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the reply, I'm getting back into righting this story, and I saw your post. It's said you're annoymous, so I would love to take you up on the offer of a beta. Hopefully you see.
Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 21 Jun 2012 3:46 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed) [Report This]
    Will Albus get a clue that the rest of the school needs a healer?

    As far as the flamers, well it is summer time. Gather them together in a pit, put a rack above them, roast some corn maybe some ribs.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Albus will bring in the healers.

     Very good idea...since their at the beach anyways...lol

Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 18 Jun 2012 11:40 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love how they are all mixed up and therefore acting out of character. Blaise Hermione is intereting and shows compasion. i'm surprised that the staff are not more in evidence supporting their pupils.

    Author's Response: The staff is in shock...some in denial...and since they have a ton of students...some of them are slipping through the cracks...
Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 18 Jun 2012 12:27 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    love it!

    Author's Response: So glad you do
Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 18 Jun 2012 12:26 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    oh what will draco do now?

    Author's Response: What else? Bait Ron on...the question is..what will Ron do?
Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 18 Jun 2012 5:53 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i have no idea what to think...i wonder what will happen between Weasely and Draco...

    Author's Response: Ron and Draco...each need to let off some steam so to speak...
Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 17 Jun 2012 5:55 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! So what is Harry doing right now?

    Author's Response: Right now...trying to help Neville...I hate how its easier to help someone else...instead of yourself..

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