| Title: Chapter 32: How can you know me, if I don’t even know myself?
| 04 Jul 2012 3:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Excellent chapter. I'm glad there are still observant people around for Nev and Hermionie.
I hope Draco actually is stuck in that hallway long enough to learn something!
Thanks for posting.
V.
| Title: Chapter 32: How can you know me, if I don’t even know myself?
| 04 Jul 2012 10:00 am
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed)
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good he noticed and good hat em took nev to sev! more please
| Title: Chapter 14: Guilt and Remorse
| 04 Jul 2012 2:30 am
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| Reviewer: abby1000 (Signed)
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I hope you do not think this is a flame. I really want to love this story but some of your word usage is quite jarring. "wanna', "Gonna", and "Anyways" are not proper words. Seeing those words supposedly coming from the mouths of British educators is hurtful. I really am really trying to be constructive in what I am criticizing. I quite like the plot points and the characterizations. I just wish I could continue with this story. Again, not meant to be a flame.
Neville's pain just breaks my heart.
And, as always, Luna sees everything.
| Title: Chapter 31: The meaning of Selfish
| 27 Jun 2012 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 31: The meaning of Selfish
| 27 Jun 2012 10:50 am
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed)
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So sad I am glad Emerson Was able to get to Neville in time.
Excellent addition to your chapter. I'm glad Luna knocked some commons sense into the boy.
Your mom's right--enjoy the summer--I love your stories, but you should have some outdoor fun as well--I certainly am, we are on a massive road trip for the entire summer (so if I don't review immediately, just know I'm probably out of wifi range!)
Thanks for the update.
V.
hmmm. I had worried about Neville. I'm so glad that Emerson got to him in time!
| Title: Chapter 31: The meaning of Selfish
| 26 Jun 2012 6:46 am
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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He's so impulsive he won't be able to keep the secret, I suspect, but I'm glad he's remembering those he "left behind" a bit more.
Helping others gives you perspective. It's always easier to look at things from an outside perspective because you're not apart of that issue. So it is always entertaining when the person is told that the scenario and person being described is the person that was receiving the description.
Funny how life works.
Looking forward to more!
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