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Title: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 21 May 2012 1:19 am
Reviewer: Kanzenhsohi (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so good! I loved the last two lines especially. Very well written with the right balance of emotions. Keep up the updates!!!

    Author's Response: Yea they had so much emotion into their words...
Title: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 21 May 2012 1:17 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    i LIKED HOW YOU GOT THE KIDS TO AGREE TO THE OATH. SO DID HARRY SHOT HIMSELF IN THE CHEST? MORE PLEASE

    Author's Response: I feel like your yelling at me...I'm gonna take that as excitement tho..and yes Harry shot himself in the chest
Title: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 21 May 2012 12:02 am
Reviewer: Aprella (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing :O When the gun appeared the first time, I thought that something like this would happen. I had to know exactly what though, so I read it in one sitting. I absolutely love it. I like how you've build it up. It's like reading a good thriller! I'm sitting on the edge of my chair, hoping that I can read more. This story is incredible!

    What I like so much, is the fact that Harry doubts. That makes it so real. In my eyes, only people who are past insanity can kill in such a forethought way without doubting. But, hey, that's me.

    I hope you are going to post more soon. This story deserves an 11 on 10!

    Author's Response:

    Yea, i had alot of people, thinking that he would be caught before he did it. But they are rarely caught beforehand, some of the worse school shooting were because someone bullied someone else and they couldnt handle it anymore. Yea you got lucky, apparently those who started reading the first, do NOT like my cliffies..oops lol

    I'm glad you like it, i'm really hoping not to disapoint. And I am, thansk so much.

Title: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 20 May 2012 9:58 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    still having trouble with flamers huh, don't let it get to you!

    great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I'm trying, dont worry.

    Thanks so much

Title: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 20 May 2012 9:27 pm
Reviewer: TATIS (Signed) [Report This]
    Chapters that good!
    That harry so heal so fast!
    There is no death of Harry???

    Good to see what happens in the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    We still dont know if Harry is gonna make it or not

     Glad your loving it tho

Title: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 20 May 2012 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Understandable that this chapter was needed. A few grammatical mistakes and typing errors such as spelling "Dolores" wrong. I think getting a Beta would be a good idea. I'm really enjoying this story, it's definitely put me on the edge of my seat but there seems to be errors here and there and sometimes sentences don't make sense because of a forgotten punctuation.

    Hope you'll get that fixed soon but otherwise update again, I'm looking forward to reading more!

    Author's Response:

    Ehh I'm impatient when it comes to updating I try to do it soon as I can, I tried a beta, it didnt work out. As long as the errors dont seem to take from my story, thats ok. Although I do try to go back and edit if I see the mistakes. As for her name, my spell check did that, apparently there is more then one way to spell Delores...and I prefer the one with the e anyways.

Title: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 20 May 2012 8:11 pm
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant, glad you had them all rally around Harry, no matter how belated it might be.

    Author's Response: Cool thanks, and yea I know, they're starting to come together...which is important for future chapters...
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 20 May 2012 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I sort of expected that Harry will turn the gun on himself instead of having to shoot Snape...

    Author's Response:

    before I fully thought out teh story, I knew Harry was gonna shoot himself lol..

Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 20 May 2012 11:10 am
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    cant wait till the next chapter will it be out soon what will happen to harry

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading, i cant tell you what will happen to him tho lol
Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 20 May 2012 9:34 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wooooow. Oh boy. Poor Hary! I hope that he will be able to live, to be okay. But after all of this, how will he live and heal and be strong again? He needs a lot of help. I am so glad that Dumbledore got through. How will they save Harry. Can they? Great story. Maybe Harry's a little more messed up than he is usually in a in-character canon version, but I could see him acting this way if enough bad things had happened. I wonder if other things happened to him that aren't explained yet in the story. Poor kid. Thanks for the update!

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