| Title: Chapter 38: Where do you go from Here?
| 29 Jun 2014 8:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This story has been great. Please don't feel the need to continue if it is triggering you.
| Title: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price
| 29 Jun 2014 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: Trish (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 37: Planning
| 01 Mar 2014 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: Hp princess no.1 (Anonymous)
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Wow, great story! Keep updating!
This is great. I understand you may never continue, as it is hard to write, but I would love it if you did. :D
| Title: Chapter 30: Think before you speak
| 15 Jan 2014 2:54 am
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| Reviewer: tresta (Anonymous)
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This is a very interesting premise; I really like the ideas you are working with. I do feel that working with a beta reader would brush up the language and vocabulary and help make this good story even better. Ideas are the essence of anything creative, but the way the art (story, sculpture, whatever) is presented counts a great deal.
I am very willing to work with you and beta the chapters that you have done so far. If you are interested in this let me know and we'll figure out how to work it.
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the reply, I'm getting back into righting this story, and I saw your post. It's said you're annoymous, so I would love to take you up on the offer of a beta. Hopefully you see.
| Title: Chapter 37: Planning
| 31 Oct 2013 7:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Lillian (Anonymous)
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I love. I BEG YOU! CONTINUE!!!!!
The story is realy good and I can't wait for more.Please post more soon.
| Title: Chapter 37: Planning
| 30 Sep 2013 6:47 am
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| Reviewer: Leonard Lovelin Davidson (Anonymous)
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Bloody well love this story! I demand more! Keep up the wonderful work, I will be awaiting the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 37: Planning
| 30 Sep 2013 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for taking up a very difficult story I like your take on the characters especially Neville
Sorry that you are having a hard time with this story. I was always taught that you had to be careful of what you said as some day it might come back to bite you in the butt. Seems like Sev (and finally Sirius) is learning this lesson.
:hands over a toasting fork loaded with a marshmallow to the author then sets down a plate of chocolate pieces and graham crackers: If the flamers are going to be here, you might as well make them useful.
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