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Reviews For Bumbled
I also liked the end with Snape and Harry collecting ingredients. Very well done. Author's Response: Thank you!! I got rather attached to the bee ^^ Thought I'd include this link to the images just in case you're interested: http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing it! ^^
And the bee. Gentle One. I believe I've become too flummoxed by your excellent writing to properly review. You'll forgive me, I hope. Author's Response: Aww!!! *squees with you* Thank you!!! Go snarky, non-snarky, suspicious snapey! Awwwwww! *squees some more and tries not to faint* my poor heart, now you've utterly flattered me... but Im the forgiving sort :D Just in case you're interested I finally put up my images to this too: http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout Thanks again! *Passes out happily*
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I finally got them uploaded so you can check them out here if you're still interested: http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout Thanks!!! xoxo
And this could quite literally turn into a full length story. ;) I really enjoyed reading it though Snape's motives for his sudden change in behavior seems unexpected...or maybe it was mentioned and I missed it. P.S- Any chance you'll updated Antonomasia soon? (Hope so!) Author's Response: Thank you!! I finally got them uploaded! Here's the link: http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout Haha, his change in personality probably asnt addressed in the slightest... Im just incapable of making a mean snape it seems... sigh. And Antonomasia... I've been revising it lately, I'm just so unhappy with the most recent chapters and it turned me right off... I have holidays relatively soon and will try my best to finish revising and begin uplaoding again... Im dreadfully sorry about the wait - I find it hard to believe one of my fics could be so anticipated but I know how it feels when its someone elses story, so Im very sorry, and thanks again for the wonderful review!! ^^
I really like how you manage to convey a whole back story in just one line - like Harry knowing just which biscuit to grab so that it wouldn't be noticed. And somehow Snape was just right, being a little nicer on a one-to-one basis than perhaps he would with a whole classroom of children. Author's Response: Haha who knows! Perhaps it was... I personally like the idea of any bee with golden wings ^^ and thank you for noticing the biscuit! That was one of those lines I couldnt not inlude once I thought of it ^^ - and we all know Sev's just a big cuddly ball of fluff... down deep.... like really, really deep. Thought I'd include this link to the images just in case you're interested too: http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout Thanks!
And I really liked your Harry - his saving people things would include animals and even insects. I also liked that this reminded Snape of Lily. Thank you for sharing! Author's Response: Thank you so much! Very high praise indeed ^^ And who could resist one of those cute fuzzy bumblebees? :) Thought I'd include this link to the images just in case you're interested: http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I tried uploading it to redbubble and it wasnt happy so I'll try again on friday... sigh... can you believe I only have dial-up at home? :'''( And yes, a rather big naruto fan (but mostly because Deidara=awesomeness ^^), you too? Thanks so much!! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! And I had the idea for both this and uni and people there seemed to think it unique too which was good ^^ Im so glad my bee pov is up to scratch, I was worried it was a little too disorienting. And I've fixed the 'tbc' issue ^^ Thank you so much!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, both - the wing's healed so our little bumblebee headed back into the wild and the following spring sees Sev and Harry colllecting plants together... or at least thats how I imagine it :D |
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