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Title: Bumbled 17 May 2012 10:26 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    What an adorable story. I really liked the bumblebee's perspective of what was going on around it.

    I also liked the end with Snape and Harry collecting ingredients. Very well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you!!  I got rather attached to the bee ^^ 

    Thought I'd include this link to the images just in case you're interested:

    http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout

    Thanks so much!
Title: Bumbled 17 May 2012 8:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for an unuual and lovely story

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing it! ^^
Title: Bumbled 17 May 2012 4:28 pm
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    *squees* That was excellent! Love the snarky-non snarky Snape doing his best to actually SEE Harry and help him and be suspicious of him and yes. *nods*

    And the bee. Gentle One. I believe I've become too flummoxed by your excellent writing to properly review. You'll forgive me, I hope.

    Author's Response:

    Aww!!! *squees with you* Thank you!!! Go snarky, non-snarky, suspicious snapey!  Awwwwww!  *squees some more and tries not to faint* my poor heart, now you've utterly flattered me... but Im the forgiving sort :D

    Just in case you're interested I finally put up my images to this too:

    http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout

    Thanks again! *Passes out happily*

Title: Bumbled 17 May 2012 8:46 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    i want to see the picture i thought this was sweet. *S*

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!!!

    I finally got them uploaded so you can check them out here if you're still interested:

    http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout

    Thanks!!! xoxo

Title: Bumbled 16 May 2012 7:53 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this was really well written and quite creative as well. Will we get to see this elusive drawing of yours? As for me, I'd love to see it!

    And this could quite literally turn into a full length story. ;) I really enjoyed reading it though Snape's motives for his sudden change in behavior seems unexpected...or maybe it was mentioned and I missed it.

    P.S- Any chance you'll updated Antonomasia soon? (Hope so!)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!! I finally got them uploaded!  Here's the link:

    http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout

    Haha, his change in personality probably asnt addressed in the slightest... Im just incapable of making a mean snape it seems... sigh.

    And Antonomasia... I've been revising it lately, I'm just so unhappy with the most recent chapters and it turned me right off... I have holidays relatively soon and will try my best to finish revising and begin uplaoding again... Im dreadfully sorry about the wait - I find it hard to believe one of my fics could be so anticipated but I know how it feels when its someone elses story, so Im very sorry,

    and thanks again for the wonderful review!! ^^

     

Title: Bumbled 16 May 2012 6:40 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    That was lovely. I assume it was a magical bee to be so busy in mid winter.
    I really like how you manage to convey a whole back story in just one line - like Harry knowing just which biscuit to grab so that it wouldn't be noticed. And somehow Snape was just right, being a little nicer on a one-to-one basis than perhaps he would with a whole classroom of children.

    Author's Response:

    Haha who knows!  Perhaps it was... I personally like the idea of any bee with golden wings ^^  and thank you for noticing the biscuit!  That was one of those lines I couldnt not inlude once I thought of it ^^ - and we all know Sev's just a big cuddly ball of fluff... down deep.... like really, really deep.

    Thought I'd include this link to the images just in case you're interested too:

    http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout

    Thanks!

     

Title: Bumbled 16 May 2012 9:40 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely, well-written story. I immensely enjoyed the "bee parts" - they sounded like poetry.

    And I really liked your Harry - his saving people things would include animals and even insects. I also liked that this reminded Snape of Lily.

    Thank you for sharing!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! Very high praise indeed ^^

    And who could resist one of those cute fuzzy bumblebees? :)

    Thought I'd include this link to the images just in case you're interested:

    http://www.redbubble.com/people/clockworksprout

    Thanks again!

Title: Bumbled 16 May 2012 8:47 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Would love to see your art! Saw your deviantart, another Naruto fan? ;) Great little story, thanks for writing it!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!! I tried uploading it to redbubble and it wasnt happy so I'll try again on friday... sigh... can you believe I only have dial-up at home? :'''(

    And yes, a rather big naruto fan (but mostly because Deidara=awesomeness ^^), you too?

    Thanks so much!! ^^

Title: Bumbled 16 May 2012 7:29 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, this was lovely. Quite a unique idea! I loved the descriptions, and the little bit from the bee's point of view. It was very easy to tell it was from the point of view of a bee. On a side note ... it does say to be continued at the end, oddly enough. It seems like it was a one shot, so I think the completed box wasn't checked or something. Anyway, just thought you ought to know. And really, gorgeous story. I quite enjoyed the imagery!

    Author's Response: Thank you! And I had the idea for both this and uni and people there seemed to think it unique too which was good ^^  Im so glad my bee pov is up to scratch, I was worried it was a little too disorienting.  And I've fixed the 'tbc' issue ^^ Thank you so much!!!
Title: Bumbled 16 May 2012 5:24 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cool! I'm assuming at the end it is spring or at least the bee had been returned to the wild?

    Author's Response: Thanks!  And yes, both - the wing's healed so our little bumblebee headed back into the wild and the following spring sees Sev and Harry colllecting plants together... or at least thats how I imagine it :D

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