A fascinating and definitely different start to your story! Sad and funny all at once.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Dec 2012 12:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Sheogorath (Anonymous)
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Nice. Long enough to be meaty, yet short enough that my attention didn't wander, and very imaginative.
Awwww I just love this story so much I had to come back and read it again :D
This story is off to an interesting start. How strange it is to see Snape and Draco in this role, helping a fully grown Harry with practically all his needs. Oh my, and I'm hoping against hope that, that character death warning isn't referring to "what happened to Granger," although I'm feeling terribly pessimistic about it. :(
Great start!
How sad for Draco and Severus. My mind is racing trying to figure out what happened to poor Harry.
Shame on Lucius for being so... Lucius-like!
This is beautifully creative. I wonder what's really happened to Harry.
wow...this is something new!
Wow this is sad:( what happened to Harry?
It's really good though and I look forward to reading the rest!
Ok so I have no idea what's wrong with Harry but this is awesome! I love how you've got the two most Slytherin people who both hated him, looking after Harry! Can't wait to find out what's wrong with Harry!
Very interesting, I'm intrigued
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