Wow, totally unexpected turn of events!
"Mummy, where's you been?" Harry cried. Narcissa was several inches shorter than Harry was, but Harry managed to bury his face in her shoulder. "I missed you, Mummy. I missed you so much."
*sniffles*
Have I mentioned that your Harry reminds me vaguely of my Session Transcripts one? Only . . . not.
What a strange turn of events, although I rather like Narcissa as a mother figure. :)
Talk about help from an unexpected quarter. Loved the ending!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 17 May 2012 5:58 am
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| Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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What a fantastic twist! I am so glad poor Harry's got some people to rally around him and help him. Poor Draco and Severus! It's hard enough dealing with a real toddler without one in the body of an adult.
First of all, you're doing such an amazing job with this. That last scene made tears come to my eyes. Beautiful job.
I also love what you're doing with the spells. Really creative!
I would never mock a person with disabilities, but I have to say that the picture of Harry taking his clothes off all the time is pretty damned funny!
Author's Response: It was meant to be, lol! Thanks for the review.
Aww that last scene was so sweet! I like how you characterise Narcissa:)
Loved the way you described Harry's reaction to Narcissa, it made me so sad!
Oh wow. Very moving chapter.
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