Sheesh! Great story but it would have been better if Hermione had survived, too. :'(
So good to read this beautiful story again.
Powerful ending to a unique story, thank you.
Title: Chapter 5
| 03 May 2013 12:33 pm
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Reviewer: Daisy (Anonymous)
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This was beautiful. Bravo!
Title: Chapter 5
| 23 Jan 2013 12:29 am
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Reviewer: hoppingpen (Anonymous)
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Excellent but I would add more SS and HP interaction towards the end. You've got Draco in there quite a bit and I think it would be more fitting to replace some of that with SS. But just a thought. It is excellent as it is, too.
Title: Chapter 5
| 12 Dec 2012 12:40 pm
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Reviewer: Sheogorath (Anonymous)
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Nice. Long enough to be meaty, yet short enough that my attention didn't wander, and very imaginitive.
This. Just... this. Beautifully written with a dash of everything that could possibly make this story *right*. Brilliantly done. Definitely a new favorite. 10/10
This is one of my faveeeeee stories, love it every time :) Hope you write something new soon!
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