How sad for Draco and Severus. My mind is racing trying to figure out what happened to poor Harry.
Shame on Lucius for being so... Lucius-like!
So the cure worked for harry but not Hermione? Was it because it was harry's power stopping it or was she just to damaged for it to work? Please let me know thank you. So Sad but well done.....Also So Harry was back and just used dracos nicname? right
Author's Response: Because Harry's magic was protecting both of them, when it stopped, the curse started to advance and she couldn't be saved in time.
Man. This was wonderful - so original! I'm impressed that you were able to tell a good story complete with action and character development and suspense in such a short space!
Author's Response: Thanks you!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 17 May 2012 7:35 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Great story! Captivating plot, I couldn't look away from the screen! Thanks for writing this!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 17 May 2012 6:07 am
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| Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Fantastic story! I really enjoyed reading it. The characters were well drawn (especially toddler!Harry) and the plot moved at just the right speed up to a very natural-feeling conclusion that built on everything that had gone before. Very well done! Thanks for writing :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the reveiews! I'm so glad that you liked it.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 17 May 2012 5:58 am
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What a fantastic twist! I am so glad poor Harry's got some people to rally around him and help him. Poor Draco and Severus! It's hard enough dealing with a real toddler without one in the body of an adult.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 17 May 2012 5:54 am
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I really like the set up of this story and how as you go along you're answering questions (I wondered why Draco was using a razor in the first chapter, for eg, and now you've explained they can't use magic) yet leaving mystery still in the story.
*sniffle* What a bittersweet ending to a wonderfully written poignant story, but totally satisfying. It's a shame that Hermione didn't survive, but in a way, her passing makes this even more emotionally realistic.
I loved the "toddlerisms" that you wrote about Harry experiencing. I laughed at his continual attempts to get rid of his clothes, and the "I can't win without you!" claims. So very much like my own children did when they were small. :)
Thank you for sharing this excellent story. It's definitely going on my re-read list! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I actually based Harry off of my son from when he was two. I believe that he is actually responsible for all my grey hair!
I liked this story... I was unsure at first because it took me a bit to realize what was going on but I must say you did an excellent job. I've not read a story with this type of story line before. Kudos to you:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's meant to be a bit of a mystery and first as to what's happening, so you got it right!
THIS.WAS.AMAZING. I should probably stop gushing now but I really really love this story. Very creative and I definitely loved the ending as well. Wish there was more, as usual. Maybe a follow up one shot?
Anyways, this was wonderfully well written and please keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely reviews! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story. I don't know about a follow-up, but I'll give it some thought.
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