Title: Into the Night
| 10 Dec 2015 9:30 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good start thank you
Title: Into the Night
| 19 Oct 2014 7:26 am
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Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This was very interesting! I love the twist you put into your story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Title: Into the Night
| 23 Jan 2014 5:27 pm
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Reviewer: Kyoko (Anonymous)
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I must say that I like the idea of Severus saving Harry, but that he would watch from outside the window how Harry gets beaten up by his uncle without stepping in right away is hard to believe. It would just take a flick of his wand to knock out Vernon when he was raising his hand against Harry. So it's a bit unrealistic for me...
Ooh, interesting! Nice start:)
Hm, very interesting start! =)
This is very interesting! I wonder who and where the rest of Severus' family is. I'm glad he gave it to Vernon. Fat slob!
Author's Response: They're in the next chapter! Read on to find out! And thanks for reviewing too!
It's good to hear from this story! I had fun Beta-ing it! It says this this story is not complete, are you planning on writing more?
Author's Response: I couldn't have done it without you!
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