Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Learning to Trust
Title: Chapter 3 28 May 2012 12:32 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job.

    I'm glad that Snape and Harry have resolved their differences and are working towards a common
    cause.
Title: Chapter 2 28 May 2012 12:20 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah. They both said things that I thnk they'll regret later.

    I hope that Snape and Harry can come to learn to tolerate each other at least.

    Good job. Off to read the rest.
Title: Chapter 3 28 May 2012 5:28 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was very good!
Title: Chapter 1 27 May 2012 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! I hope that Harry makes it to the castle in time, and I hope that Snape survives this.

    Good job and intriguing start. Off to the next chappie.
Title: Chapter 3 27 May 2012 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, the dialogue seemed kind of forced and the fact that Harry apologized right after he was done saying how much he hated Snape seemed unrealistic. If the animosity had played out a bit longer and something happened in which they realized they were wrong about each other and then the forgave the other, it was have seemed more logical and believable.

    Definitely a good effort on your part and you still did a good job writing it. Keep it up!
Title: Chapter 2 27 May 2012 9:01 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Just a few mistakes bu other than that, a lovey read!
Title: Chapter 1 27 May 2012 8:58 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely start!

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