| Title: Prolouge: Time was Running Out
| 26 Nov 2019 8:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic start thank you
Oh no! Why are they keeping an alliance with Snape hidden from Ron?
Interesting start! =)
Just wanted to point out at this line "he, Hermione, and Harry had nuck away..." I think you meant "snuck".
Other than that, this was a really interesting set-up. Though short, I liked that it was mostly from Ron's POV. It was suspenseful enough that I knew something was going to happen, without really getting a hint as to what. Off to read more...
What an interesting start, I'm already hooked!
| Title: Prolouge: Time was Running Out
| 01 Jun 2012 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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OOh, this is intriguing.
Hermione and Harry are brother and sister I assume?
Great start. Off to read the next chapter.
Oooh this is a really interesting start! Can't wait to see where it goes!
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