| Title: The Past that Made the Future
| 26 Nov 2019 9:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Ugh, Dumbledore in this story is a major d-bag. I'm glad Severus swooped in and saved little Harry and Hermione.
Ugh, Dumbledore! How could he do that? I'm glad Severus figured it out and protected himself from it in the future. "the man under all the layers of black fabric." I really liked this line!
This entire chapter made me sad for Harry, and for Severus. I'm not sure I agree with what Severus did to the Dursleys, as surely magic would have been detected as being used there? Either way, it's the Dursley's own fault! I did like how he made it so it would seem that Harry is still living there, I'm interested as to what other would think if they realise the'd been tricked all those years. Karma, Dumbledore. Off to read more, of course...I'm already hooked.
This is getting more and more interesting. I'm really liking what I'm sure so far!
| Title: The Past that Made the Future
| 01 Jun 2012 2:59 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, so Hermione is the Malfoy's daughter?
This gets even more intriguing. Off to read...
Awww that's so sad! :( Well at least Snape has finally come to rescue them!
Great story
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews.
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