| Title: Present: Time to Hide
| 26 Nov 2019 9:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great action and I love how you are letting out little snippets of information at a time, thank you
Ah, this version of events is so strange and scary. Run Rosemerta and Severus! Run!
Yay, Dobby!
"Harry stood there. He wanted to say something. He wanted to tell his Dad to be safe. But, Severus had been too fast." This is a powerful sentence. I think it said a lot, and I felt sad for Harry.
Ugh, Dumblefore, again.
I simply adore Lucius and Narcissa when they're not evil and whatnot. I also loved that it was Lucius who comforted Harry first by rubbing his back, rather than Narcissa. We don't normally get to see a side like this to him.
I found it amusing that when Harry said Ron saw them, the first thing Draco asked was "why where you at Saint Mungos?". And Draco making a mission to kill Dumbledore was amusing too, in a sadder way though.
Awww, love the framed picture. And the words around the frame too. I wonder who was at the door though...Dumbledore, maybe?
Good chapter!!
So climatic! I really love this softer loving Severus along with the rest of the characters.
Ooh, what's giong to happen now?
YIkes, I'm worried.
Good job. Off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I am glad that you like it:) Thank you for your review.
Phew they managed to get out on time! This is really good so far, enjoying it a lot :)
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