| Title: Direct Hit
| 26 Nov 2019 9:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Plot upon plot. You continually surprise us and make us want to read more. Thank you
ok, I'm throughly confused now. What the hell is going on? LOL
Man, you're doing a great job of messing with my head in this fic. Everything that I thought I knew is actually a lie. The monsters aren't monsters after all, and the good guys are worse than I ever could have imagined.
Though I think he needs to calm down a bit, I do feel sorry for Harry in this chapter. Well, all chapters so far, really.
Voldemort is coming to visit...I find that hilarious! And lol, yes I imagine it would be awkward to talk to him after Harry spends his school year pretending Tom is evil. This was certainly a flip, to consider Dumbledore evil and Voldemort is coming to dinner for preferred meal from a house elf. I loved the interaction with Harry and Severus, and the “Mum is going to make you talk to me tonight.” made my laugh. Harry's parting words in that conversation was also amusing.
Awww, I LOVE Narcissa meeting Hermione in the flashback. And when Hermione was wearing the dress, I thought it was odd and a bit silly someone bought her something when they knew she didn't like it. Then to hear who did buy it, then it was kind of sad and I liked the dress a lot more. I feel sorry for Narcissa too. I mean, she was like Hermione's mother and then...
The line about the glare his mum sent Harry was hilarious! I had to pause to laugh at that. And the look on Snape's face when Harry asked about chess had the same result...I'm loving this chapter. I think it's my favourite so far. The cliffhanger, however...you're mean! :)
Hey, just a quick note, the spacing is off in these past couple of chapters. Not sure if you knew that.
Lovely chapter, as always!
Lol this is so dramatic! Not exactly sure where this is going but that's what I love about it!
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