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Title: Mother May I? 27 Nov 2019 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the emotions shown in this chapter thank you
Title: Mother May I? 06 Jun 2012 6:08 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. This is really odd. But I like it!
Title: Mother May I? 02 Jun 2012 4:58 pm
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    That broke my heart. It's a sad situation that Hermione, Narcissa, and Bellatrix are in.
Title: Mother May I? 02 Jun 2012 1:30 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting
Title: Mother May I? 01 Jun 2012 4:28 pm
Reviewer: watercrystals (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting thought...If Harry had to listen to his father during potions talk about James, yet say how Harry was "just like his father"...was Severus really insulting himself? Haha.

    I'm so torn between the two mothers Hermione has.They're both so eager to be her mother, to care for her and all that, so I struggle to pick one over the other. I hope there is some way Hermione can be equally shared, as impossibly difficult as that may be. I do, however, love the scene when Hermione hugged them both. A really sad, but touching scene.

    Wow. That scene with Harry and Severus was really intense. It was...I have no words, just..wow. And the ending of the chapter was nice too.
Title: Mother May I? 01 Jun 2012 4:21 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad the three ladies were able to sort out their problems. I enjoyed reading this as always!
Title: Mother May I? 01 Jun 2012 3:38 am
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, it's quite funny seeing Hermione breaking the rules! Definitely what we expect from her! ;)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Title: Mother May I? 01 Jun 2012 2:31 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor kids.

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