| Title: The Plan
| 03 Feb 2013 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I just started to read your story. Very nice beginning! But you wrote "brook" a several time instead of broom. It's a little annoying!
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know. I will fix it right away.
Oh. shit. So much for Voldemort not using the connection.
| Title: A Solution And The Third Challenge
| 30 Jun 2012 11:42 pm
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| Reviewer: cm0011 (Signed)
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I really liked that last line. It really sets alot of insight on Snape. He is normal. He can feel heart-broken for what Harry might lose.
what in the world is dumbledore playing at putting harry in snape's rooms
I'm liking it. Just one thing: Lily's eyes, and Harry's eyes that resemble hers, are actually green, not blue. Just a little nitpick xD. I'm a little surprised that Snape has developed such a paternal feeling so quickly, but when the son of the woman he loved is literally fighting death, that can happen. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Title: My Lord, You Will Have To Take A Number
| 15 Jun 2012 6:03 am
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| Reviewer: cm0011 (Signed)
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This is quite interesting. Although I feel Snape's and Dumbledore's personalities a little too contrasting to their actual characters, but not by sooo much, as I am still intrigued to keep reading. And you post chapters quite fast! Nice job, keep on with it! :)
Please update again soon!
Aww what a sad chapter! I do hope Harry will make it!
The last sentence was a bit anti climatic. I think it should have been a bit more heartfelt than that but other than that, I enjoyed this chapter.
Also, there's something wrong with the spacing in this chapter. It was fine in the last one...
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