The last sentence was a bit anti climatic. I think it should have been a bit more heartfelt than that but other than that, I enjoyed this chapter.
Also, there's something wrong with the spacing in this chapter. It was fine in the last one...
Wow, this is the first I've read a story like this! I expected him to be caught by someone who meant him harm, maybe a death eater, but not automatically turned over to Voldemort! poor harry :( poor sev! that must be heartbreaking.
anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!
Wow. Good chapter... Can't wait to read the next one.
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