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Title: Chapter 2 09 Aug 2014 4:16 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised the memory loss wasn't examined further by the staff. Harry is adamant that he doesn't remember it and wouldn't have even had the time at that point so it seems like something they should investigate further. I'm also surprised that they expect Harry to work and take care of his classes and, when it comes, help with the baby. He won't have time to deal with Voldemort at that rate. Heck, having Voldemort kill him might seem preferable.

    Author's Response:

    Exactly! At some point the Professors will be able to see that they're putting the weight of the world on Harry's shoulders and no student would ever be able to do all of the things they're forcing him to do. There'll be a breaking point, depending on where the story takes me is where that will be. Thanks for the review!

     

Title: Chapter 2 22 Jul 2012 11:48 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting premise! I'm intrigued to see where this story leads. I wonder what could be causing the memory block? And where in the world did this mystery baby come from? I'll definitely keep reading!
Title: Chapter 2 12 Jul 2012 3:31 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Not surprised the Professors of Hogwarts aren't listening. Majority of people always back up the one who got knocked up and blame the other for not using protection.
    Really though as it said before it takes two to tango so the 'I didn't know the spell!' really isn't any excuse. I'm starting to wonder if there's a dark Ginny in this story LOL.
    Can't wait to see what happens.
Title: Chapter 2 08 Jul 2012 9:01 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an awesome story! I feel so bad for him though! When will you update? I need an update!!!!
Title: Chapter 2 07 Jul 2012 1:50 am
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like it, but I'm so angry at everyone!It just so unfair Could you please make Harry more independent? Like hire a lowyar or sth like that (nd meantime kill Dmbels:P).
Title: Chapter 2 07 Jul 2012 12:08 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Rather unfair of everyone to be so disapproving of Harry - as he thought to himself, it does take two, and Ginny doesn't seem to be claiming force. It makes for a good story by isolating him though. Hope the next chapter comes along quickly with some clues as to whats happened with Harry's memory.
Title: Chapter 2 06 Jul 2012 10:49 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    At least the teachers are trying to be supportive... Harry's situation is really unfair!
Title: Chapter 2 05 Jul 2012 8:45 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Dear Merlin, I know I said it was okay, but I still want more. Gah. Killing me Kai, killing me! I just want to hug Harry. I do like how everyone blames him and not the female...I feel we do that a lot in todays world...As if females don't have a part. ;)
Title: Chapter 2 05 Jul 2012 7:22 pm
Reviewer: Chicago Myth (Signed) [Report This]
    great start. why isn't harry just using his inheritance to support him and ginny until he finishes with school?
Title: Chapter 2 05 Jul 2012 5:56 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh. I'm still wondering what happened.

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