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Reviews For Field of Broken Dreams
I think you're doing a really good job in developing this story, and I'm really enjoying it. I'm glad Severus and Harry went back to Joanna and Sam, because I like the four of them as a family, even if they're still not exactly that (not yet, but one day I hope). I am a bit curious about a few things, such as how Joanna and Severus met, and how long they've been together. Also, How old was Sam when his father died? If Jason moved out a few years ago but came to them when he was 14, then Sam would have been relatively young, right? Oh, and does Jo (or Sam) know about Lily? Or any of the history with Harry and Severus in regards to hating James and such? I assume Sam would have mentioned Harry and Severus at some point over his time at Hogwarts. Which also ties to me wondering how long Sev has been with Jo and all that. It's nice (and realistic, in my opinion) that while Harry struggles to talk to the adults, he can talk more easily to Sam. I would like to see Sam and Harry as brothers, perhaps more than anything else, as they fit so well together. I think it would be a really nice if Sam was the one Harry opened up to and who helped him, and then he could be the one to convince Harry to talk to Severus and Jo (or one of them at first, if Harry is not comfortable telling both for whatever reason). I honestly don't think I can see Harry telling them without the urging of another (hense, Sam), or at least not at this point. I really, really like what you've done with the story so far, so I will be following it and reviewing when I can. Keep up the good work and I hope you'll update again soon. Oh, and I love the banner! :D Author's Response: Thanks for the long and in-depth review watercrystals, I'm glad you're enjoying it. At this point I'm going to say that Severus and Jo have been together dating for about a year and a half, and Sam has known about it since they got engaged last Christmas and obviously when Severus moved in with them over the Eeaster break as was mentioned before. Sam was younger when his father died, maybe 9? I haven't set an exact age for that. Joanna doesn't know about Lily, and you will have to wait (hehehe) to see if she ever finds out, but remember Harry's already told Sam that his dad and Severus had it out for each other in an earlier chapter. At this point the story will be going in a different dircetion than Sam convincng Harry to talk to their 'parents' but don't worry, he and Harry will still become brothers of sorts. Harry's angst and uncertainty about getting thrown out will continue until the very last chapter of the story, though they may subside briefly in the telling. Thanks again for the review!
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