I really love this story, I can't wait to see the next chapter! By the way, I'm French, so if you need any help with that, just tell me ;-) you would say "Rue de la Vérité" for example, if you want to sound more French :-)
Lovely, thank you for this story.
Firstly, I wanted to point out a mistake I saw: "What's Vérité Sam asked." - speech mark misplacement. Just thought I should mention it, though it hadn't really bothered me.
Anyway, I really liked this chapter. Though I like every one of these chapters. I found the pictures very useful and the places look really nice. It was much easier to picture the locations with the images to aide it.
I was sympathetic for Harry at the beginning with what he was thinking, and how he thought Sam might have tattled on him. The chapter overall was a nice read, though a bit sad Harry had his birthday pass by without anyone noticing until he mentioned it. I thought it was so nice that Severus took him out for a bit of cake and a milkshake.
The revealing of Lily though...wow, I hadn't expected that! Now I share Harry's wonder...is Snape his father or not? That would be really interesting indeed. And kinda cool, if there's Jo and her son as one half of the family, then Severus and his son. I don't know why, it just seems ironic but nice.
For some reason, of the entire chapter, the part that stood out the most was around the Quidditch broom section of the chapter, when Severus was watching Harry and Sam getting along so well and wondering how it was easy for them but harder for him. That was very strong and I really loved that bit the most.
Thanks for the update, and keep up the great work because I really love this fic and am looking forward to reading more!
Wow, great job! I really enjoyed this chapter and I can wait for the next one. Is Snape really Harry's father? I guess we'll find out :)
Loved their little trip to France :)
| Title: Verite
| 11 Sep 2012 5:58 am
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| Reviewer: Rye (Signed)
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Yes! Will this be a Severitus? Or a Sevitus? Please, more!
I loved this chapter, rather bittersweet. I really want to see Harry blow up at Snape-it seems kind of stupid but there's still so muh unresolved tension between the two and Harry feeling insecure and all that. It would possible clear some air between them. Anyways, update soon please!
Ooh, this was a revelation to Harry. I thought that that was really nice of Snape to take Harry out for his birthday.
I can't believe that Harry wishes that Snape was his father. Well, you never know...
But if Snape would continue to act as though he "were" Harry's father, that would be wonderful. Harry would finally belong somewhere and have a brother and mother too.
I loved the Paris scene too.I'd love to see more of these scenes of Harry and Snape.
Good job. I can't wait to see what happens next after the revelation that Snape had dated Harry's mother.
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