Jo kicked a child out? At night? What bitchy behaviour.
Ha! I knew he would be eavesdropping. I like this story.
I like this story. I like your Snape, he simply doesnt want to be bothered. It is a perfect approach. Usually Snape is over-hating or over-protective all of sudden. This is much refreshing.
Snape not surprised over his injuries?
I like your Snape
I really love this story, I can't wait to see the next chapter! By the way, I'm French, so if you need any help with that, just tell me ;-) you would say "Rue de la Vérité" for example, if you want to sound more French :-)
Lovely, thank you for this story.
Firstly, I wanted to point out a mistake I saw: "What's Vérité Sam asked." - speech mark misplacement. Just thought I should mention it, though it hadn't really bothered me.
Anyway, I really liked this chapter. Though I like every one of these chapters. I found the pictures very useful and the places look really nice. It was much easier to picture the locations with the images to aide it.
I was sympathetic for Harry at the beginning with what he was thinking, and how he thought Sam might have tattled on him. The chapter overall was a nice read, though a bit sad Harry had his birthday pass by without anyone noticing until he mentioned it. I thought it was so nice that Severus took him out for a bit of cake and a milkshake.
The revealing of Lily though...wow, I hadn't expected that! Now I share Harry's wonder...is Snape his father or not? That would be really interesting indeed. And kinda cool, if there's Jo and her son as one half of the family, then Severus and his son. I don't know why, it just seems ironic but nice.
For some reason, of the entire chapter, the part that stood out the most was around the Quidditch broom section of the chapter, when Severus was watching Harry and Sam getting along so well and wondering how it was easy for them but harder for him. That was very strong and I really loved that bit the most.
Thanks for the update, and keep up the great work because I really love this fic and am looking forward to reading more!
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