Wow, great job! I really enjoyed this chapter and I can wait for the next one. Is Snape really Harry's father? I guess we'll find out :)
Loved their little trip to France :)
| Title: Verite
| 11 Sep 2012 5:58 am
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| Reviewer: Rye (Signed)
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Yes! Will this be a Severitus? Or a Sevitus? Please, more!
I loved this chapter, rather bittersweet. I really want to see Harry blow up at Snape-it seems kind of stupid but there's still so muh unresolved tension between the two and Harry feeling insecure and all that. It would possible clear some air between them. Anyways, update soon please!
Ooh, this was a revelation to Harry. I thought that that was really nice of Snape to take Harry out for his birthday.
I can't believe that Harry wishes that Snape was his father. Well, you never know...
But if Snape would continue to act as though he "were" Harry's father, that would be wonderful. Harry would finally belong somewhere and have a brother and mother too.
I loved the Paris scene too.I'd love to see more of these scenes of Harry and Snape.
Good job. I can't wait to see what happens next after the revelation that Snape had dated Harry's mother.
| Title: Past and Present
| 05 Sep 2012 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter thank you. I love the angst and the way the adults are blundering along not really helping. Thank you
| Title: Out Of Place
| 05 Sep 2012 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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This made me feel all tears thank you. I love the angst! How is Dumbledore going to take Harry leaving the wards?
| Title: Out Of Place
| 05 Sep 2012 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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This made me feel all tears thank you. I love the angst! How is Dumbledore going to take Harry leaving the wards?
Great update JA. I'm glad that Jo and Snape are there for Harry, even if Harry is fighting them a little right now.
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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