| Title: A Quiet Place
| 26 Aug 2012 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Phew thank goodness their life isn't all kittens and butterflies yet. Glad to see more angst is in my future lol. Update soon!
| Title: The Home That Wasn't His
| 26 Aug 2012 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Oh my goodness! So much angst! I'm slightly angry at Jo now, and Sam needs to stop being a prat. I'm really glad Snape is finally seeing Harry for who he is and what he needs. Very well written, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: The Home That Wasn't His
| 26 Aug 2012 9:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Poor Harry. :(
I guess that it was inevitable that Sam would get jealous, but it's sad still that Joanna and him both threw Harry out. I'm disappointed in Joanna.
I'm glad hat Snape plans on being there for Harry. I just hope that they can all become a family again.
Good chapter JA. I'm anxious to find out what happens next.
Aww poor Harry! Im suprised at Jo jumping in without asking what had happened like that, im glad that Severus has finally realised Harry needs him :)
Wow very emotional chapter, had me in tears. I know that when things settle and Severus and Jo talk it will be ok.
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one:)
wait....what?
But...she....he....huh?
Okay, so when Jo said "Nobody talks to my son like that. It's time for you to leave." and basically kicked him out I thought she was a boggart! And then that got me thinking maybe Sam was a boggart too. And this was all in Harry's mind and that everything was really okay.
Wow. Im speechless again
Interesting so far. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Interesting so far. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
The plot development in the chapter was really good. You said it's not edited yet so I won't mention anything about that. I'm working on my punctuation and grammar (also spelling) a bit so I was surprised when I recognized a few mistakes. I'm really enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, I edit as I go, and I hardly ever go back and edit what I've written if it's just fan fiction, mostly because people are asking for immediate updates, and once it's updated I'm off writing the next chapter already. Sorry about any grammar mistakes you may have seen. I think most of my chapters have at least one, but hopefully not more than three.
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