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Reviews For Return to Sender
Title: Chapter 1 25 Aug 2012 11:13 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent atart. It's so nice to see Lily and James (especially) written as proper character even though they only have a small part in the story.
Title: Chapter 1 13 Aug 2012 5:17 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the detailed description of Godric's Hollow, as well as the encounter between Voldemort and the Potters-- you've done an excellent job of filling in some blanks in canon, showing us "the rest of the story" of that fateful night. Terrific opening to your story!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Aug 2012 2:42 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...interesting start. There seem to be some formatting issues on this chapter, but it's probably having to do with P&S. It's easily fixable by going into your story and editing out the extra spaces. Also the code r12 shows up a couple of times.

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