| Title: To Have a Name
| 20 Aug 2012 1:59 pm
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| Reviewer: kazza (Signed)
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A wonderful, bittersweet story. I'm not sure that Severus is much out of character. He might have behaved that way given the chance
Looking forward to the sequel and seeing how Evan is coping. Great story
I liked it...oh won't you write longer stories too? Lol :)
Author's Response: I do write longer stories...but they aren't allowed on here...well, some of them are, but most of them don't contain the right type of relationship...I don't write Harry/Severus slash, but in most of my stories, Severus is just a peripheral character. I do have a longer story that I will be posting as soon as I get the HTML tags down, it is about 9-10 chapters long and has a small one-shot sequel.
That was a good beginning. I especially liked having the goblins involved in the adoption. The new name makse sense but may take a little getting used to.
I love it !! Hope you'll update the sequel soon :)
I really like the way you write I just can't stop reading :)
Love it, and I'd love a sequel
Very nice. I'd love to see more, as I'm sure it won't be easy for Harry/Evan to adapt to this new life.
Okay - that was great. It is good that they didn't name him Harry as that would have confused him.
A sequel would be nice.
Severus shouldn't be too angry with Draco - couldn't pick on each other and Draco had no way of knowing that Harry had been hurt before.
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