| Title: Chapter 2
| 07 Jan 2016 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Aww, it's over! :( Thanks for writing such a cool story, really enjoyed it!
Love how long your chapter is, very nice first chapter! :D Both in character, awesome writing.
Oh this was such a perfect story! Epilogue please! End it with "And all was well." I'd probably cry if you did that. Great job.
If this is a two shot, and there are two chapters, then why is this listed as incomplete?
Anyway, excellence fic. This is a different take on the subject that I have admittedly not seen before.
Anyway, well done.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 03 Sep 2012 12:17 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a great story.
You wrapped that up nicely. Even though Snape has softened towards Harry after viewing the memories he is still, as he says, Severus Snape.
To be continued? So it's not over yet? Wonderful!
I love it! You did a wonderful job wrapping the plot up, with Harry and Severus completely in character, which isn't easy to achieve with such a sensitive topic. It was good to see a mature Severus who can admit to his mistakes and deal with the consequences, while plotting Vernon Dursley's demise (which will not be pretty, I'm sure).
Thanks for a great read!
I love this story! And I love it that Snape stays in character. I really enjoyed it!
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