Love how long your chapter is, very nice first chapter! :D Both in character, awesome writing.
This was a nice, well-conceived plot. I like the way it all came together. Very believable. It will be interesting to see what Severus has to say when he wakes up.
Good first part, lots going on to set things up. I can't believe you'll be able to round it off in 2 though, unless you've got a really nice long chapter planned!
I love it so far! Harry did a great job helping Snape - let's hope it breaks the ice and allows Snape to see the truth. I wonder if Vernon did anything more than threaten Harry... from the situation Snape walked in on, it seems so!
Looking forward to part two!
Good start. I wanna see more! Kudos.
not onefic, not twofic, but make is a longgggg longggg longgg fic!!!! Honestly what a story! I great! I'm desperate to know why he was actually frozen at the corner... I beg you, make it longer! I expect something horrible, but twisted me wants to read it. Please update soon!
Very well written! I look forward to reading the second half.
wooow! I really really want to know how this is going to continue! Hope you'll update soon!
Can't wait for the next part - although the thought of Vernon doing this kind of thing to Harry makes me feel sick.
Also I'm really anxious to read how Severus will react to Harry caring for him :D
Please, update soon!
Good job, however I'm a bit worried that Harry's gonna get an earful for "trespassing" because he surely can't have been the one who saved Snape, don't we all know that he's pathetic at potions!?
Or maybe not ;-)
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