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Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Thank you for a wonderful story! Author's Response: I am glad you liked the 'shy' Severus! I rewrote the end of this chapter a little late in the game, so it is nice to hear that you were pleased with it. And thank you for the wonderful feedback Eszther!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter! She is good for Severus, isn't she? Thank you so much for the review!
I liked the way Evelyn got the device to Severus. Using the Hogwarts house elves to transfer it was ingenious. Nice chapter. Author's Response: I am glad you thought the idea of the house elves as a method of transfering the box was clever. I thought that an explanation of how it all played out could bring the story to life just a little more. I am glad you like the idea of Evelyn coming back with them. You are right, it could make an interesting follow up story. But hey, she's got to make up her mind first! Thanks a lot for the review bridgeportfox! |
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