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Title: A Transmission 15 Oct 2012 1:48 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    They really do need to come up with some sort of plan for after the digging, or else no-one will be going back. But Severus - don't be a fool and let Evelyn slip through your fingers!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Title: A Transmission 13 Oct 2012 9:11 am
Reviewer: Eszther (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the shy and closemouthed Severus there at the end. I am keeping my fingers crossed for the two of them getting together ...
    Thank you for a wonderful story!

    Author's Response: I am glad you liked the 'shy' Severus! I rewrote the end of this chapter a little late in the game, so it is nice to hear that you were pleased with it. And thank you for the wonderful feedback Eszther!
Title: A Transmission 12 Oct 2012 1:36 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I kinda want her to come back..because she's good for Severus..waiting for next chappie, this was good.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter! She is good for Severus, isn't she? Thank you so much for the review!
Title: A Transmission 12 Oct 2012 6:24 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the idea of Evelyn coming back with Harry and Severus. Her adapting to their time period at Hogwarts and the reactions of the staff and students would make a good follow-up story.
    I liked the way Evelyn got the device to Severus. Using the Hogwarts house elves to transfer it was ingenious. Nice chapter.

    Author's Response: I am glad you thought the idea of the house elves as a method of transfering the box was clever. I thought that an explanation of how it all played out could bring the story to life just a little more. I am glad you like the idea of Evelyn coming back with them. You are right, it could make an interesting follow up story. But hey, she's got to make up her mind first! Thanks a lot for the review bridgeportfox!

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