| Title: A Change of Plan
| 27 Oct 2012 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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Please let her go home with him! He could really do with some tender loving care...
Author's Response: A little hope goes a long way Eszther! Thanks so much for the review!
Good plan, Severus. But... things are running too smoothly. I'm worried something horrible is about to happen to someone.
Author's Response: Well, with this kind of mission, disaster is always imminent. Thanks for the review rosina!
I think it was a good decision to get Harry out. It is getting too dangerous. It's nice that we got to see Severus and Evelyn' emotions - Severus so concerned and Evelyn starting to show her feelings for Severus. I would like to see her come to the future. Now, if Harry can just get out of the Society safely?
Author's Response: Glad you liked Severus' decision, and Evelyn showing her feelings a little. It was a tough chapter to write for me, so I am glad it was appreciated. Thanks a lot for your feedback!
I really like Evelyn..and this chapter.
I love Sev of course, its risky but I'm worried about Harry myself. Besides Sev is a snake, he'll have a plan right?
Author's Response: I am glad you like Evelyn. It's nice to hear someone is on Severus' side when it comes to Harry's situation, I am sure he would appreciate it ... ;) Anyway, thanks so much for the review and the feedback!
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