Awww, that was a sweet story. A nice different take making Petunia be the evil abuser. And I did like the stranger situation, brilliant idea using it.
Author's Response: The idea for the strange situation popped into my head when i learned about it last week and the idea would not leave me alone.Thank you for the review
Its a little odd to have Vernon be a good guy...but it was still a very good one shot.
Author's Response: thank you, i wanted to do a different side of the abuse so i thought that having vernon as nice and petunia as the abuser would do just that.
More would be nice, to see hoe Snape and Harry get along.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I do plan on writing more however my time is being taken up by a multi chapter fic for a different site so until i have posted at least some of that fic this one will have to take a back seat.
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Thank you a fantastic story I can't believe it is your first! Please write a sequel perhaps with Dudley doing magic andVernon coming for help.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
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Thank you a fantastic story I can't believe it is your first! Please write a sequel perhaps with Dudley doing magic andVernon coming for help.
Author's Response: Thank you, i have been writing bits and peices of other unposted stories, this one however just would not leave me be so i had to write it. i am planning on doing a sequle however it will have to wait a few months while i work on a multi-chapter fic that i am posting on another site.
Oh that was cute! I would LOVE to see a sequel! It was nice to see Vernon nice and a non-participant in the abuse.
Author's Response: I wanted to make Vernon Different from other stories that i have read so I thought that i would make hom the good guy. i am planning on writing a sequle to this but at the moment i am working a multi-chapter fic on another site and it is my prioirity at the moment however i will come back to this in a few months. tnkas for the review
Please write a sequel. I like that Vernon is nice and gets rid of Petunia. I did like this story just would like more details please!
Author's Response: I am planning to write a sequle however I am working on a Multi-Chapter fic for another site which takes priority right now so I will more than likely not right anymore for Strange Situations for a few mounths.Thank you for the Review
Excellent first story! I found it a fascinating departure from the usual "Snape-being-forced-to-check-on-Harry" stories, since Snape himself is required to assume a "comforting" persona as part of the experiment. I've never heard of this type of experiment, but I can see how it would work out the way it did in Harry's case-- all kids seem to like people to play with them on the floor, and when Harry's been so deprived, it would act as a catalyst for him to seek comfort in the stranger. But Vernon came as a true shock-- I'd thought he was faking at first! You really took me by surprise! Great job overall, and I'll look forward to your future stories! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you Very much, Strange Situation experiments are used to find out attachment type with children and there parents, when i first read about the experiment Severus and Harry jumped into my mind. As for Vernon i wanted to do a different take on the abuse side I am glad that it worked and went ok. Thanks again for your review.
A cute little story and interesting to see a compassionate Vernon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the Review i am glad that you liked it and i am glad that you were ok with the new take on the abuse idea coming from Vernon rather than Petunia
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