I love the premise of this story. The way you’ve woven Snape in his memories with Harry in the present is downright brilliant.
This is a really original idea and I'm loving it!
Really good chapter. I like the way you alternate between Snape's memories and Harry's current life. Having Harry, Ron and Hermione at loose ends, leaves them to try to figure out the curse and how to break it and I am enjoying their discussions.
Ohhh poor Severus! After all he went through during the war, and now this! Brownie points to Harry, though, for being so understanding and taking him in like that!
Ooh, this is really good. It feels very real, and the transitions from what is going on with Harry into what is going on in Snape's head are great. I love the way you portray the characters, and I really like how you can see Snape starting to become the man he is. Quite intriguing!
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