This was an excellent beginning to your story. It conveyed a world of emotions and answered key questions in a skillful way. Thanks for this.
I've been tracking this tale for a while but had not gotten around to starting in on it until now. Upon seeing that it had recently been updated, I felt it was an opportune time to start following it more actively. Can't say that I'm disappointed. Quite the contrary, I do like how you have begun this story. I look forward to seeing what is to follow. Nicely done!
Awesome beginning, quite original and intriguing! Snape's characterization seems quite on the dot, and I'm looking forward to seeing how many others noticed Harry's resemblance to Severus. So nice to find a well written story, thank you both for sharing! :D
ughh why do people always keep beating down the dursley's and petunia? dose no one think on the why? i do. it is rather obvious why she hates magic. her being violated by something she had no defense from.
Good first chapter. You didn't mention but was Harry sorting into Gryffindor? I look forward to Snape's first meeting with Harry. Clearly it won't be a by the book meeting.
Good first chapter. You didn't mention but was Harry sorting into Gryffindor? I look forward to Snape's first meeting with Harry. Clearly it won't be a by the book meeting.
Now you two have me curious. What do you have in store for us?
Yes, yes, yes!!! I really like how this has begun. :-)
I can hardly wait to see what comes next in your partnership in bringing forth this story.
And, thank you so much for writing a relationship between Severus and Albus that is based on love in the familial sense. It might not be canon but it was just what I needed to read today.
Well done!
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