Excellent story, very enjoyable to read, I look forward to more.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 28 Nov 2012 11:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I love Minerva and Severus together
Lily, the human. Yes, I am all yours.
Loving it! Good job :P PLease keep writing and updating. I love Minerva in this. I felt it was a fair portrayal. Albus as well. I'm curious though why only professors are seeing the resemblance. Is it because he looks like a younger Snape and not the current one? Or just children not looking? Well anyway I look forward to the next chapter.
I especially enjoyed Harry and Ron's reactions to Snape when he found them in the corridor. I would have been disappointed in the twins if they hadn't teased the younger students about the 'evil bat' of a potions master. As to Severus possibly being Harry's father, it would change the way Snape views the boy. He couldn't hate someone that he and Lily might have created. I like the idea of the generally saintly Lily having some flaws and temptations like the rest of us.
I love how you did Minerva. I can really picture her as I read your words. Love how he is keeping an eye out for Harry.
Great chapter! A great sick day read, thank you so much! So how will they tell Harry?
| Title: Chapter 3
| 27 Nov 2012 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Maggy (Anonymous)
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Lovely story please keep it up!
I really love this - wonder how the scene where Severus grills Harry will go in the Potions class when they do get there. I also can't wait to see how he approaches Harry with the possibility that he could be Snape's son. SWEET!
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
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