| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Oct 2012 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: amariposa (Anonymous)
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Brilliant so far! I don't know what it is (especially after only one chapter), but something seems to set this fic apart from many of the others in this genre. Hmmm...I do know I just seem to love your version of Snape so far (and Harry, of course). :)
I don't know whether to be extremely happy I came across this at the very beginning or terribly sad it's not complete already lol.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Oct 2012 2:29 am
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| Reviewer: Con Moto (Anonymous)
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That was really good, I can't wait to see what happens next! And poor Snape kept sneezing. I hope he gets better soon!
Oh, nice beginning. I can't wait to read more.
It sounds intriguing too. I like a younger Harry, and POA is my favourite HP book too.
Well, I so looking forward to see what you do with this story. Either way, I know that this story will be great, because you're a talented author.
That's a great start! Good job and I cannot wait to read more. I'm glad that Snape figured out that Harry had done ACCIDENTAL magic instead of actually trying to inflate Marge. If Snape had not, it would have likely created even more "drama."
I can't wait to read more! I hope this will end up becoming an adoption fic :) I've had lots of fun reading this chapter. Please update again soon!
Love it can't wait for more. Update soon
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