You’ve written Snape brilliantly. His comments are hilarious.
Harry wondered if public embarrassment was a new form of torture that Snape was testing out.
LMAO :P Brilliant line.
The training exercises were interesting. Using dodge ball and obstacle courses to train Harry is a good way to increase his agility and reflexes. It's also a productive way for Snape to torture Harry. I'm enjoying their conversations, too. It sounds like they are getting used to each other.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 14 Nov 2012 10:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story they are both so natural but in character, thank you so much
I don't like to shop and thought Harry came up with a good suggestion. Really good job on the two personalities trying to mesh together. Uncle Sebastian.
Haha this just gets better and better! Snape's already acting like a father… sort of. :D Please update again soon, I can't wait to read more!
Great chapter! This is turning out to be a very interesting summer for both Harry and Sev. I'm glad that Sev is becoming closer to Harry, though the process is slow, which makes it even more realistic!
Lovely, love a snarky Snape. The sick one was pretty good too.
Aw, that was cute! lol Poor Harry. Shopping for underwear with Snape would not be my idea of fun. Uh...well, never mind. Poor Harry.
Great chapter though. Love this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Great chapter! I loved all the little things that you put into the chapter, it helped make it "real."
""It is not rare for a duelling wizard to also intentionally cast spells against their surroundings. While the other participant is attempting to guess what is next coming, the first wizard has blown up the wall beside him."" Aww, a nod to poor, poor Fred? Aww. :-( I was angry when he (and snape, and dobby, remus) died.
The bit at the end about clothes shopping was right on too! Hehe about the last line. Embarrassment indeed!
AWESOME JOB!
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